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Mii
11-14-2009, 05:56 AM
This was made for fanfiction.net, as a Sonic the Hedgehog fanfic. So bleh.
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Mii: Ah :D First story~nya.
Shadow: Oh please tell me you're not doing one of those stupid RPC couple stories.
Mii: Oh that's EXACTLY what I'm doing, dearest.
Shadow: -sweatdrop- So am I going to be making out with some made up character or something?
Mii: Later in the story, maybe. Haven't decided yet~nya.
Shadow: Great -_-" Some other stupid fangirl...
Mii: D: Aw, Shadow, don't be like that...
Shadow: Mii does not own Sonic the Hedgehog.

~~

[Shadow's POV]

"Please, won't you stay?"
"No. It's late."
"Shadow, you don't even have a place to sleep."
"So?"

How boring. Arguing again with one of my best friends, Mii. She's a cat. Sometimes she turns into an actual cat. To be honest, I prefer her that way more, she doesn't talk as much.

"Shadow, that's not fair." She lowered her ears in disappointment. She was still determined to make me stay another night.
Every day I would come over, to keep her some company. The sad thing is that she has a crush on me. She lives alone because her parents left her because she always misbehaved. She used to have anger issues, but she worked them out thanks to me.

"Why won't you stay?" Her fake tears were beginning to work on me. Although, I was starting to wonder if they weren't fake. "I have...things to work out."
"Liar."
It remained quiet and we just stood there. Her eyes were sad and almost irrisistable. I kept a straight face, though; that's just me.
"Fine. I'll stay." She almost immediately lit up. "Oh, Shadow, you're the best!" she squealed as she leaped towards me and threw her arms around my neck.

To be honest, it was really cute. I like her a little, I guess. I mean, not like love or anything. Just, maybe, a SMALL crush. She's always using her adorable charm on me -- sad thing is, she doesn't know how effective it is, considering how straight my face always is.

"Um...What would you like for dinner?" I honestly hadn't thought about food. Now that I think of it, I really am starving...
"I'll have, uh, er...Well, what DO you have?" I questioned with a bit of cluelessness to my voice. "Hmm...Well, we have...let's see...Potatos, burgers, spaghetti, cold pizza..." None of them sounded appetizing. "I heard there was a Chinese restraunt down the street. I can order from there if you want..." A Chinese restraunt, hm? Although I do love my foreign food, I decided I could settle for a snack. "Nah, I'll just nibble on whatever you've got," I finally answered. Her face went from embarassed to concerned, but she just said "Okay..." and went on with her life.

"I'll be right back," she commented suddenly. I was a little curious to why she ran off, but sat down on her couch and turned on the TV anyway. There was really nothing to watch, so I decided to play our favorite video game: Rock Band. I usually handled the bass and occasionally the vocals. Most of the time I only did bass, though. Mii handles the drums, and she too occasionally sang. Her voice is amazing...

"Okay! Sorry if I took too long. Are you setting up Rock Band?"
She had changed into her nightgown; a stretchy silk blue slip-on dress with spaghetti straps and laced at the bottom. It always made my heart skip a beat, but she never found out. Her hair was put up into a ponytail (also made my heart flutter) and her eyes were sparkling turquoise. It was her usual nightly outfit, but it always made her seem so innocent; which she wasn't, considering all the murder she had done in the past.

"Yeah. Did you want to do something else?"
"Well I guess, but I mean, if you want to play..." She blushed.
"What did you want to do?"
"The usual." With that, she grinned.
Now, this wasn't your usual high-from-happiness grin. This wasn't your teehee-I-know-right grin, or your yeah-it-was-me-so-what grin. This was a downright scary grin you'd only see on girls with an evil plan.
And you're probably wondering, what is "the usual"? It's an extremely scary movie or video game. I always have to play the video games, because Mii gets too scared and hyper to actually PLAY the game. And then she'll get all adorable and scared and huddle up on me. She usually screams, but its a kind of squeal more than a scream.
Now, she doesn't act like she's afraid for her life, she's kind of like holy-crap-this-is-so-scary-OMG-GET-OUT-OF-THE-WAY-OMGOMGOMGOMG-UR-GONNA-DIE-*squeal*-*huddle*-*peek*-SHADOW-MOVE-YOU-IDIOT-*squeal*-KILL-IT-*squeals and huddles*

"Gears of War. Bad to Worse. Insane." She hopped onto the couch and gathered her legs close to her, so she formed a ball. After putting in the game, I sat down in the corner of the couch, my usual spot. She huddled up next to me and watched as I started the game, and chose her favorite scenario, Bad to Worse, insane mode. I could feel her shaking; I was probably a little more scared than her, knowing her personality. She would probably scream, but she never messed me up on the game. She would always fall on the floor and I'd have to pause the game and I would try holding in my laughter and she'd be rolling around laughing so hard she couldn't breath. Then I'd laugh a little because she'd be laughing so much, and as most people know, laughter is contagious. Then she'd stop and her head would hurt and I'd have to turn off the game because I knew it got her too hyper and she'd get sad and then we'd turn on a movie and she'd get scared for real and she'd have to sit on my lap because she'd have to turn away, and at some points she'd start crying because she was so scared.

But that hasn't happened yet. She watched and heard the rumble. "Shadow, where are the enemies?" "Coming." "Are those the enemies?" "No." "Where are they?" "Dunno." "Are they coming?" "Yeah." "No thHOLY CRAP SHADOW KILL THEM KILL THEM OHMYGOD KILL THEM"
The screaming had began.
She started squealing and biting my shoulder slightly and kept ordering me to "kill that thing, kill it, kill it now" until they were all gone. Then they were finally dead, and I had to go face what made her scream most: the Berserker.

So I walked through the door and went into the big room, which Mii said was beautiful and she would definitely live in if the Berserker wasn't there. And it was; it was a little gloomy and gray but had beautiful plants and vines that connected to the ceiling, which was probably another level. Reminded me of an old shooting range I used to go to.

So of course right when I enter the room I see this thing on the screen. It was pitch black and didn't look like it was in the game; I think it was a roach?
Now, I love it when bugs like these crawl into her house, because she totally freaks out and gets scared for real. She screams at it with true fear like she would in a video game but without the smiles and giggles.
So of course I have to kill it or she'll be shaking all night, so I get up and grab the bug spray and spray it on the roach. It falls to the floor and I can see her relax a little, but of course she's been shaken up and she's still nervous. I pick up the bug with a paper towel, throw it away, and hop back on the couch. She sits on my lap and wraps her arms around my neck and just watches me play. I have to say, I do enjoy how close she loves to get to me, but I kind of miss how she doesn't freak out. It's really funny to hear her screaming and flailing for her life.

I finally kill the Berserker and I can feel her readjusting to a more comfortable position. It's about 1AM, but Mii usually stays up this late every night since I usually stay over. She shifts so that she can fall asleep on me while I watch TV.

So, for her benefit, I get her up and she stands to the side while I lay down, and she lays down in front of me. I take out her ponytail and toss the holder to the side table, turn off her gaming console and switch to regular television. The only thing that's really on is South Park, so of course Mii has to watch it because she adores that show. It's a rerun though, so she turns over and tries falling asleep while I watch it.

I stared down at her face and watched her sleep until I was falling asleep as well. I turned off the TV and picked her up in what was now going to be my custom way of picking her up: bridal style. I carried her into her room and decided that one night in bed wouldn't hurt. I had never slept on an actual bed before.

I layed her down and her face became a pained expression; probably shock from the cold. My heart sank at the sight of it, but went to get into my night clothes just to be sure she wouldn't freak out. It was actually just a pair of black shorts made from soft fabric.

I threw back the covers and climbed in. This room is freezing. I watched Mii sleep for a while, and began falling asleep. So I did what no man had ever done before.

I held her close.

At that moment that I began to hold her, I realized that I didn't just "like" her. I had been denying myself all along. Mii was there for so long, by my side, how could I have been so oblivious? I didn't just have some stupid school-kid crush on her.

"Sweet dreams, my dearest Mii."

I loved her, and now I had this little puff of perfection in my arms.

~~
WOO! Was the first chapter good?
If I get 5 good reviews, I'll post chapter 2? ;D

screwbaII
11-15-2009, 12:48 AM
Sorry, thread was moderated :x don't worry though it is now viewable to everyone :D

YniYni
11-15-2009, 01:39 AM
i like it :D

Riida
11-15-2009, 04:03 AM
I liek eet.

It's pretty awesome.

POST CHAPTER TWO! :D

Olive
11-15-2009, 04:06 AM
Wow, interesting. Kinda long but interesting.

Mii
11-15-2009, 05:53 AM
Chapter 2. Hope you like! <3
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Mii: HEY GUYS! Hope you liked the first chapter, because whether you like it or not I'm making more.
Shadow: Oh dear lord...
Mii: Shadow D:< Don't be so rude outside the story.
Shadow: ...
Mii: Thaaaaaaat's right. They always shut up. STAY THAT WAY TOO! -storms off-
Shadow: -sigh- Mii does not own Sonic the Hedgehog. *runs after* MII! COME BACK! YOU HAVE TO BE HERE FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER TOO!
Mii: MAYBE I DON'T WANT TO!?
Shadow: Hey, did you know the camera's still on?
Mii: Oops.

~~

[Shadow's POV]

"Yeah, yeah, sure Amy. Of course! No, I don't want any cheesecake. What?! You're kidding. Maybe I don't want to?!!?!?! EVER THOUGHT OF THAT, HUH!? I'm kidding. I'll be there soon. Bring the whole gang, kay? WHAT DO YOU MEAN THEY'RE ALREADY THERE?! Oh I hate you so much. I DON'T WANT TO HEAR ANOTHER WORD FROM YOU. You better wait though, or you're dead."

Ahh, my lovely little fuzzball just HAS to scream loud enough for me to hear. From what I understand, Amy's meeting her at the mall?

"SHADOW, GET YOUR LAZY A- Shadow? Are you in my room?"

Funny how she doesn't ever remember anything.

"SHADOW, GET YOUR LAZY A-oooh a puppy!" And with that, she scampered to the TV and let me off the hook.

Okay, I was wrong.

"Shadow, you're going with me to the mall. Get dressed." Within a few seconds I had a pair of bright green Converse, black denim skinnyjeans, a gray tank and a black jacket (made from a soft material :D ) in my lap. I decided to use her closet as a changing room, since she probably would want her bathroom.

I should mention, Mii's closet is amazing. It's like her bathroom, only without the shower and such. She has a full-wall mirror in front of you when you walk in, and if you turn left there's another door leading to another room with the actual clothes. Then she has a shelf in the right corner of the mirror to do her makeup. She even had a little thing of water for makeup. Let me tell you, she has TONS of eyeliner, mascara, lip stick/balm/gloss, eyeshadow in shockingly bright colors, etcetera. Her hair accessories where all in one drawer. She had a LOT of bows, some bobby pins, ponytail holders, and barrettes. She had many different styling machines, but she mainly used her straightener. She had about 5 different colors of hairspray: blue, pink, green, black and red. Amazing.

"SHADOW, YOU BETTER NOT BE WEARING ANY OF MY HAIR STUFF. IF YOU DO, I'LL KILL YOU!~"

Sigh. I love you too. I decided to wear my glasses today. I remember the first time Mii saw me with them: "Oh, erm, uh, Shadow, heheh, um, would you like to, um... go sh-AAAAAA!" Of course, she had tripped and fallen.

So I guess I'm giving her a treat...Oh, boy.

I stepped out of her closet and knocked on the door. "Mii? Are you ready yet?" "Almost, Shadow! Hey, wait a sec..." I could hear her voice get quieter as she got confused and tried to fix something. I smirked and stood against the wall. "Okay, if you want to come in now, you can," I heard from beyond her black walls.

I walked in to see her wearing a black&white tank, hair down, an awesome-looking black hat, black&white armwarmers, a red heart-on-chain belt, black converse and white tiger-striped pants. She had put in colored contacts to make her eyes look red -- and I say, she looked amazing.

"What, you like?" She twirled to show off.

"Uh...Sure, let's go."

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[Mii's POV]

"AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!"
"Dude, what are you DOING?!"
"Hahahahahaha, you look so stupid!"

We were totally siked about today, and I have no idea why.
Me&Shadow, Sonic&Tails, Amy&Cream, and Knuckles&Rouge.

"First stop, FOOD COURT!" I squealed. I began running with Shadow's wrist in hand. My friends followed and I grinned.

"I'm going to Villa Pizza. What do you want, Shadow?"

I stared at his face to watch him decide, and noticed he was wearing glasses. I started making little comments in my mind until he finally made up his mind.

"I'll have whatever you're having."

Great idea, genius.

"I'd like a slice of cheese pizza and a bowl of your spaghetti and meatballs, please, with an extra garlic roll," announced I did to people behind counter.

After getting all our orders, we decided to sit in the middle of the foodcourt, near the fountain.

"Attention, attention! We are having a dance competition in 10 minutes! If you would like to participate, please sign up using these forms! Thank you!"

A dance-off? Hmm...

This could be interesting.

YniYni
11-15-2009, 06:23 AM
Hmm... I think i liked the first chapter better but that might just be because i have some attachment to anything romantic even if it is slightly strange. i think you should continue writing them tho you might be able to make something really good out of this! (I must ask! have you changed the characters to human form or left them as is?)

Mii
11-15-2009, 06:33 AM
Sorry if this chapter is a little graphic Dx But I need something interesting, right?!
And to Yni, they're in their regular forms.~
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Mii: WOO! Hope you liked that chapter :D
Shadow: DUDE. A DANCE-OFF? SERIOUSLY?!
Mii: Well, yeah.
Shadow: Oh, why me...
Sonic: HEY, SHADOW.
Shadow: WHAT.
Sonic: Meow! :3
Amy: SONIC. I just texted Mii and she's making us go out in the story!
Sonic: WHAT!?
Mii: AMY YOU STUPID SPOILER! -smacks with bat-
Shadow: o_o Oh dear god -_-'
Amy: Oopsie. x:
Sonic: MII DOES NOT OWN ANYTHING IN THIS STORY...except her OC, Mii :D
~~
[Shadow's POV]

A dance-off? Great. I don't like to dance, but I like watching girls attempt to dance. I've never seen Mii, dance, though. Odd.

"5 more minutes until competition!"

I quickly finished my spaghetti and garlic roll. Mii, however, looked like she was debating something.

Please tell me she wasn't going to dance.

"Mii?" "Yeah?" "Are you thinking of dancing?" "Yeah..."

I looked at her with curiosity as she nibbled at her pizza.

"I don't think I will." She continued nibbling at her pizza with doubt. After a while she lightened up and began eating like the Mii I know. She scarfed it down, then ate her garlic roll as fast as she could. A few sips of the soda, and shes ready, still looking awesome.

"Let's roll." We all threw away our trash and went on our spree. "Hey, can me and Rogue stop somewhere?" Knuckles suddenly asked. "We promised a friend we'd go see them at a store." "Sure," Amy agreed. Mii waved goodbye and began walking towards her "favoritist store in the world," Hot Topic.

"KYAAAAA!~ Shadow, look at all this!" I had lost her in her world of girly clothes.

I decided it wouldn't hurt to look around, so I walked, observing the band t-shirts and such.

"SHADOW! EE!" I knew that squeal. "LOOK AT THIS TUTU! AND THAT TSHIRT! EEEK! I WANT IT ALL!" She picked up a lot of tshirts (7 to be exact), and a few petticoats. I laugh at her girlishness.

She grabbed a few buttons before we officially bought everything, and ran to the check-out counter.

"$84.57, miss." "Here!" she gave him a 100-dollar bill and grinned. "Keep the change."

After HotTopic, we went to Justice to make fun of the little girl's clothes. Then Spencer's to admire all the flashing lights, then Bath&Body works so Mii could get some more hand sanitizer. We then headed to one of my alltime favorite stores: PacSun.

Of course, Mii bought TONS of stuff here. Too much to list, in fact. Then we went next door to Wet Seal to browse through all the cute shirts, but Mii didn't buy any. It's a miracle.

"Look Shadow, Dairy Queen! Text Amy and the gang to meet us here while I order." "Er...Okay."

--

[Mii's POV]

"Shadow, there's a shortcut up ahead. Let's take that route."
"Mii, that place looks dangerous."
"Ah, who cares. I'm going without you then~"
"Mii, don't, please." He grabbed my arm.

"No, Shadow. I want to go this way, and you don't. So I'm going to go that way."

He pulled away, because he knew it was pointless to argue with me. He also had my stuff, 'cause he felt it'd be polite to carry my luggage.

Anyway, I rushed down the dark path that I knew for a fact was a shortcut. Although dark, I ran with an enthusiasm that soon slowed down to a spine-chilling horror, as I soon got a feeling of claustrophobia.

What's with this place, anyway?

__________>line!no,flashback!<__________

"Mii, shut up! We don't want to hear your nonsense!"

Another slam, another painful scream.
Another tear rolled down my face.

"You have caused your mother nothing but trouble! This, dearest, is your punishment!"

Whip, scream, hit, throw.
That's what I have to put up with almost every night.

"I don't know why your mother even bothers to keep you around anymore."

...

"You should've never been born."

"No..."

I stood.

"You're wrong...
I can be what I want to be...
Do what I want to do...
And I'm sick and tired...
OF YOUR COMPLAINING!"

I tackled him.
Took his pocket knife...
And slowly began to engrave my name onto his body...
For eternity.
Tonight...
My pain and suffering will end.

_________________________________

"Hey, little girl."

"Huh?!"

I felt a hand on my shoulder.

"Come with me, would 'ya?"
"Uh...No."
"Don't be stubborn, brat."

Now he was getting agressive.
So I bit his hand and stepped back.

"Look here, you worthless good-for-nothing slacker. You can either walk away now unharmed, or regret you ever saw me."

"Heh. Get over here."

Oh, he didn't just do that.

"He...Hey...You didn't tell me you...could...grow...fangs...?"
"Come here, brat."

Mii
11-15-2009, 06:51 AM
Also, to clarify anything, the man is the one noticing the fangs, and Mii is the one saying "Come here, brat" referring to the name he called her earlier. <3

Riida
11-19-2009, 10:31 PM
When are you going to post the next chapter? D:!??!?

Mii
11-19-2009, 10:38 PM
Um, when I finish it, which might take weeks, maybe months.
I'll probably finish it this weekend, when I feel like working on it.

Riida
11-19-2009, 10:40 PM
LOL, I should make you get online more by doing that.. :P

Ah. Well, I hope you have a good time finishing it :D.

Cthulhu
11-20-2009, 01:55 AM
No matter how good it is or who makes it, I will always hate fanfiction with all my heart and soul.

Mii
11-20-2009, 04:29 AM
Well thanks for that. that makes me feel SOOOO much better. ._.

YniYni
11-20-2009, 05:23 AM
uhhh lol? Mii i know this is sorta off topic but if you open up your sig and hover over the picture it tells me it is 2:36 AM GMT time...

Cthul i didnt know you had a soul..... but i do like the way thats worded even if its somewhat mean

Yui
11-29-2009, 08:16 PM
;3 I love this~~
Please post moooreee~~~

<_< >_>
TIS BE ASHIE :3

DDX Seriously, this is so good!

thebunni15
05-25-2010, 04:13 AM
DDX Seriously, this is so good!

How..wha.how...WHY?

EDIT: Well, I guess she is still active, she signed in 2 days ago...>.<

Madi2
05-28-2010, 08:44 PM
How..wha.how...WHY?

You saved all this time just to wait for another one?!?!

No that was posted before.

Oh wait, this thread was dead, thebunni.

thebunni15
05-28-2010, 10:54 PM
Wait, why was this thread have a notification that it had a new post?

Madi2
05-30-2010, 02:54 PM
Wait, why was this thread have a notification that it had a new post?

Because you subscribed to new posts?