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Mii
01-20-2010, 06:07 AM
Rain without light
Is still beauty in itself
I stand under the only shelter
Available outside.
Listening to the rain pouring, pouring...
I rush back inside
Turn on the light in front of
My dining room window
That looks apon the backyard.
The pool becomes a blurry mess
Of tiny circles
That seem to vanish within an instant
Only to form new ones...
The rain falling off the roof
In a tiny corner,
Of course it will be a
Greater amount than usual
Like a waterfall, only
Less water.
Like tiny white shards
That seem to move up and down
But somehow in the same place...
The carpet under the only
Shelter outside
Is soaked,
Like marsh...
A wetland.
I tiptoe around the pool,
The blurry ocean,
Only smaller...
My feet are freezing,
Numb.
Walking around the pool once more
To go back to the marshy wetland
That I call "shelter"
From the rain...
I glance up one more time
Before going inside
To see the clouds, moving fast
They glare at me as if to say
"We'll let loose if you
Go over our limit."

Stepping inside
My toasty, warm home
I feel comfort...
Much, much comfort...

Made in its own section because Shinju's thread accidentally got deleted...So yeah...

rosedragon
01-20-2010, 04:36 PM
good work!

thebunni15
01-21-2010, 12:55 AM
Wait...did Shinju's Poetry Corner like disappear?

Clandestine
01-21-2010, 06:56 AM
...It got deleted? .___.
I was going to use a poem that I posted in the thread for something later on...
Now I have no reference, FML.

The poem's nice, by the way.
Would it happen to be rainy in Arizona this week?

jillie
01-21-2010, 10:24 AM
yeah it got deleted TT___TT

maybe rose can get it back ;_;?

screwbaII
01-21-2010, 11:40 AM
It's non-salvageable, someone that wasn't me deleted it permanently. Probably by accident while deleting other spams.

Clandestine
01-21-2010, 01:16 PM
Well, that narrows it down quite a bit.
Jk jk

Anyway, I hope it doesn't happen again.
Especially on the doodle thread. xD So much memories there.

amy1
01-23-2010, 09:29 PM
memories like every one doodles ;P?