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robizeratul
08-12-2009, 09:56 PM
Bunny's Poem(part 1)

Drinking beer and eating Chips
Thinking of your lovely lips
At the bar looking at you
Million things i want to do

Grab you in my arms so tight
Say lovely things and don't lie
Staying in the nights,so long
And singing the lovers song

Running wildly in the woods
Faster than an athletes boots
Playing with your cutest nose
In your arms i feel exposed

This my dream my cutest Bunn'
I love you like does no-one
But The time will come some day
When i love you I will say


---Hope you enjoyed it---

About this:i wrote it in exactly 7 minutes,i write poems in my free times and i can count 50+,it's a dying art but if someone would like to speak about them i feel free on this forum!i did try many places,but few people show interest:PBut well...that makes me so much happier if i see your opinion:)
Edit/2 i took of the obscene stuff:)hope u like it now:)
Don't stop at criticizing me,i await your honest opinion
http://3.bp.blogspot.com/_NyfYKHZN9B0/SY_uW-vi95I/AAAAAAAAApk/T5O-l-3eyEA/s400/Love+Bunnies+4.jpg
With love,a bunny lover:D

1samurai1
08-12-2009, 10:06 PM
This is very good but there could be some inapporiate stuff @_@

Chokladkakan
08-12-2009, 10:15 PM
I agree with Samurai there, but I must also address my love of those knitted bunnies!

rosedragon
08-13-2009, 07:36 AM
wooo nice poem you got here :D .. but probably I love more the knitted bunnies!

Xaozaddiction
08-13-2009, 04:17 PM
great poem ^.^ and the knitted bunnies are soooooooooo cute o3o

robizeratul
08-16-2009, 10:21 PM
go bunnys:)

Lovelight
10-22-2009, 06:54 AM
I will attempt to be a ninja and steal your bunnies!

-Tries to go upside down on a rope and falls-

Darken Sin
10-22-2009, 08:31 PM
The bunnis frolicked here
In Bunni island, they breed
In us, we are them.

jillie
10-23-2009, 01:07 PM
fluffy fluffy bunniess~ jumping in the woods...
fluffy fluffy bunniess~ jumping as they should~
one bunny jump- two bunny hop- UH OH! darken's head fell off Dx!
(it always has to be the last person that said something who's head falls off)

jillie
10-23-2009, 01:10 PM
Bunny's Poem(part 1)

Drinking beer and eating Chips
Thinking of your lovely lips
At the bar looking at you
Million things i want to do

Grab you in my arms so tight
Say lovely things and don't lie
Staying in the nights,so long
And singing the lovers song

Running wildly in the woods
Faster than an athletes boots
Playing with your cutest nose
In your arms i feel exposed

This my dream my cutest Bunn'
I love you like does no-one
But The time will come some day
When i love you I will say


---Hope you enjoyed it---

About this:i wrote it in exactly 7 minutes,i write poems in my free times and i can count 50+,it's a dying art but if someone would like to speak about them i feel free on this forum!i did try many places,but few people show interest:PBut well...that makes me so much happier if i see your opinion:)
Edit/2 i took of the obscene stuff:)hope u like it now:)
Don't stop at criticizing me,i await your honest opinion
http://3.bp.blogspot.com/_NyfYKHZN9B0/SY_uW-vi95I/AAAAAAAAApk/T5O-l-3eyEA/s400/Love+Bunnies+4.jpg
With love,a bunny lover:D

that's so sweet...
.. so sweet i was crying while reading it. xD..
HAA.. it's so cute... i wish i could write things like that again xD

wonderme
10-24-2009, 04:16 PM
awww so romatic

shinjumaou
10-25-2009, 08:26 PM
How nice... That poem is lovely! And those little bunny toys are just the cutest! >w<

robizeratul
10-04-2010, 06:13 PM
:bunnipriest::bunniking:
Standing with a flower
Just hanging in my hand
Hope it will be over
Praying for the end
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Remember when i first saw you?
Thinking,love,this can't be true
Looking at your lovely ears
But i stop,cuz there come tears

Furry hands and funny crown
In your love you made me drown
Looking in your lovely eyes
Everything,but your love dies....

Standing with a flower
Just hanging in my hand
This love is just our
This nightmare will surely end!!

*And then i woke up!I'm happy that bunny didn't leave me.I write this post to my bunny in this world,so she can know that everything bad is just a nightmare,from which we will awake!

I love you!

shinakim
10-06-2010, 03:46 PM
Zeratul, both part one and the new part two are amazing. Unless that was just another, not a part two. @.@

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