Magical colonization RP Tread

[cirpons]

Read the Magical colonizations singup for the lore.

[Xaozaddiction]

Xaoz and his crew were walking through the dark plains of Penovolen. Xaoz was happy that they decided to conquer Penovolen first, because he loved the darkness. They walked a few miles until they found a small town named XeFang.

"This looks like a good place to start" Xaoz said wile liking his fangs.
"This town looks so poo----r tho...." Emma said with a sigh.
"Well, its only for now, until we move on." Responded aden.
"Hm, guess we heave to do." Crent was also kind of mad of how the town looked.
"Well, maybe they arent as poor as they look? but i doubt that...." Ryan said with a sarcastic voice.
"Well, lets some hell then." Xaoz started to smile. the group started to walk to the town.

[cirpons]

it was midnight when we arrived.
Wertez said slowly taking out his book: Gola start making a den and fast.
Oh ok... :gola said and taked out a red stone and started burning a hole in the nearby mountain.

[branch12]

branch standed on a hill,with his crew(i will call them my army)his army dangled flags in the air and got ready for battle

[cirpons]

Gola made the den and sayd: Done.
Wertez was tired and dint want to hear some one else so he replyed: good now lets go to sleep.
and so they all goed to sleep.

[branch12]

branch saw 3 barbarian divisions encamped down the moutain,he would lead the charge

[Xaozaddiction]

(( hey cirpons can you please uses writing instead of scripted, if not its ok because it is your rp))

Xaoz and his crew walked into the town. the people who were near stared at Aden, who was covered with swords he stole from his greatest enemies. Aden was use to it tho nd didnt care.
"Ok... hello every one, we are here to conquer your town. Surrender, or face death." Xaoz said loud enough so every one could here him. The civialians started to wine about the take over, saying things like "they cant do this", and "This isnt fair". Suddenely someone yelled "Guards help please."

"Well, atleast we will have some fun..." Emma sighed again wile taking out her bow and loading an arrow. The rest of them took their weapon, Aden choosing his fiery broad sword.

[cirpons]

OoC: What?

[screwbaII]

(( hey cirpons can you please uses writing instead of scripted, if not its ok because it is your rp))

He means rather than saying:

[name 1]: "I am talking"
[name 2] "I am replying"

say:

[name 1] said to [name 2] "I am talking" [name 2] did something in reaction to what [name 1] said, and responded saying "I am replying"

If that makes any sense. Basically make it more interesting by saying what the characters are doing and how they are reacting and interacting with each other rather than just writing a 'script' of what they are saying.
But if you are allowing script posting in your rp then go for it, but it isn't a good habit to get into if you want to rp well, that's all :)

[cirpons]

OoC: WoW, you are smart.

[Xaozaddiction]

Some guys in light metal armor came, mus be the guards Xaoz thought. they had swords and bows, but it didnt matter what they had, Xaoz and his crew would destroy them with ease. "Drop your weapons and leave now, or we will kill you. This is your only warning." The guard that said it had armor that looked better then the rest and had a blue insignia on his left shoulder, must be the guard captain.

Xaoz started to laugh, it sounded evil. "How about we give you one warning to leave, and we wont kill you."

"Thats it," the captain sounded really mad "Guards kill them." Five guards came at them, swords drawn. Another 3 had bows out and started to shoot at them. The captain just stood there.
"Well we warned you.." Xaoz sighed. He rose his scythe and then brought it down on the guard closest to him. Their armor was so weak the blade went through like a hot knife through butter, almost completely amputating his arm.

[branch12]

branch wanted to create a new city,were they start there empire,they start the city were the frist battle will take place with the barbarians to take the land...he lead his troops,they were ready...they all charged down the hill,branch wounded a barbarian and killed him,my troops set a tent on fire,they would clean up after the battle,the battle continued on